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Uprising by Juh-Juh Uprising by Juh-Juh
Booyah, me is going into a drawing-frenzy if I got some ideas!^^

One of my mates asked me if I could do the picture "Rebirth" in the front-view...I like to draw wings (and badly I overdo effects as usual) so here it goes. ;)

I still tried to work with the same priciples of the previous one, but this time I needed a little bit longer on working (4 1/2 Hours)...and this time it wasn't really random. ;)

Anyway, hope you like it and all that stuff.


I ALWAYS OVERDO THE EFFECTS :iconfoshoplz:


Done with Paint Tool SAI

Previous one from the side-view :
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:iconmuller-saru:
This peculiar piece is something that caught my eye. The beautifully drawn fire wings are something you can keep staring at for a lot of time, and still you wouldn't be able to find a significant flaw on it.

The background is simple, but it goes very well with the picture, since there is not much background detail, the viewer can focus on the main picture.

The girl itself is well detailed, and has very few anatomical proportions flaws, but other then that she is amazingly done. Her hair is another thing that caught my attention, as it has good shading and format, another well detailed feature.

The picture as a whole has a great perspective and you can see the author spend a good ammount of time working on it, the result is nothing less then we expect it to be, Beautiful.
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is disproportionate body, the belly was quite muscular, and thin arms and legs, the arms are too long.
But the effect of the wings was excellent, and the design can move forward, I'm not particularly a fan of light effects exaggerated, but I think as you put it was well balanced.
Missed more dedication to the anatomy, and does not need to write the signature so great, the highlight has to be the drawing.
I hope I have helped in your professional growth as a designer.
Do not give up and train a lot, because only then can attain perfection. hug
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SugarTofu Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Waaaaaaa!!!!! Epic! >W< I love it!
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011
Thank you! I'm very glad you like it. ^_^
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Prophosphere Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
The effect's always stunning :faint:
As usual :XD:
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:iconjuh-juh:
Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Well...I still doubt on it somehow. :XD:
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akireminamino Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow::jawdrop::iconepiclaplz::iconexcitedlaplz:
you're amazing!!!:iconomgsocuteplz:
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:iconjuh-juh:
Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Whow! Thank you, I'm very glad you think so! ^_^:iconblushplz:
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akireminamino Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, I love your art!!:icononiononionplz:
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fr00tsnak Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011   Digital Artist
It does look really awesome from the front, I think I prefer the side one though, just because of the wings :D
the skin and hair here are shaded beautifully though~
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Thank you, I'm very glad you think so.^^
Well, everyone has their own opinion, so it's cool. ;)
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NaSiAGrEeCe Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O.O!!!!!!(speechless)
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:iconjuh-juh:
Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
^^ :hug:
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CrystalSabre Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like the wings and her outfit.
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Well, then I'm glad you like them. ^^
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KleioAmon Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
cool.
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Thanks.^^
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Muller-Saru Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This would do an awesome wallpaper for my boring 4:3 screen... The effects are AMAZINGLY done, and the girl itself seems to have no perspective or anatomy flaws, not even simple colouring mistakes. A true piece of art indeed.
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Whow, thank you! I'm really glad you like it and appreciate your comment you left here. ^^
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:iconmuller-saru:
Muller-Saru Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. I don't supose im allowed to use it as wallpaper am I? xDD
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:iconjuh-juh:
Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Whow...I actually don't that anyone would use my stuff as wallpaper...but hey, just feel free to use it! ^^
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:iconmuller-saru:
Muller-Saru Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconlawooplz: Yaaay Thank you!!
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
I better have to thank YOU for using my pic as wallpaper! :icon0u0plz:^^
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:iconmuller-saru:
Muller-Saru Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Or I should Thank YOU for creating it xD No doubt anyone who comes here at my house will be dazzled when they see the wallpaper ^w^
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Mhm...we'll see.^^
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0Tenshi-no-Tsubasa0 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this one and the other one are amazing!! i love this person!! The wings are elegant as every and hair is perfect they way it blends with the body and wings. Showing the characters feeling and power.
Love your work so much!!
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Thank you, I'm really glad for your feedback and that you like it. ^_^
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0Tenshi-no-Tsubasa0 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome and sorry about the comment errors!!
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nepomuf Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
Hab zwar kein Premium, aber ne Kritik kann man auch so schreiben. Und es ist nur eine Meinung, denk daran ;)

Verglichen mit dem Seitenansicht ist das hier die schwächere Arbeit. Die zentrierte Komposition ist weniger dynamisch, es fehlt ein wenig Bewegung. Du versuchst das mit Bewegungslinien auszugleichen, ordnest sie aber zum Teil ein wenig konfus an. Schau dir mal die beiden Bilder als Thumbnails an und vergleiche, wie die Linien wirken. In der Seitenansicht ergibt sich ein klares Bewegungsmuster, und deshalb funktioniert das Bild uA so gut.

Die Proportionen der Dame sind nicht ganz optimal geraten, denn die Pose suggeriert, dass der Betrachter zu ihr aufschaut, was zu einer Verkürzung von oben nach unten führen müsste. Hier ist es teilweise umgekehrt, auf den Brustkorb scheine ich von oben zu schauen. Letztendlich ist es dadurch schwer, ihre Pose im Raum auszumachen. Hinzu kommt das alte Problem (ich weiß selber wie schwer das ist^^), das Gesicht zu verkürzen und das Kinn von unten zu zeigen. Gut gelungen sind hingegen Arme, Hände sowie Beine. Auch das Shading der Haut weiß zu gefallen. Die Haare sind nicht so fein ausgearbeitet wie in der Seitenansicht, sie wirken ein wenig schwer und blockig - dazu trägt auch bei, dass die Flügel offensichtlich komplett vor den Haaren sind, statt mit ihnen zu interagieren.

Die Farbpalette von warm nach heiß hat schon im Original prima funktioniert, du hast gute Kontraste benutzt, alles ist lesbar. Aber - wie du es selbst sagst - man kann es mit den Effekten übertreiben. Das Bild ist flashy und da du mit Überblendungen gut umgehen kannst, gelingt es dir Einiges zu kaschieren. Das machen wir alle irgendwie, ich zB mit exzessivem Shading in meinen Zeichnungen. Aber man sollte sich dessen bewusst sein und ab und zu bewusst drauf verzichten. Du wärst überrascht, was man noch alles aus einem Bild rausholen kann ;)
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Oh mann, du bist einfach der Beste! Echt vielen Dank für deine Kritik, ich schätze es halt überaus sehr!^^

Du hast halt in allen Punkten klar nachvollziehbare Argumente und zu jedem Punkt kann ich dir nur zustimmen, Proportionen sind halt wirklich nicht mein Ding und ich tendiere auch wirklich ungewollt dazu mit diesen Effekten maßlos zu übertreiben, der Standpunkt mit den Haaren und den Flügeln hat mich zum Nachdenken gebracht das Bild evtl. doch nochmal zu bearbeiten...mal schauen wie es zeitlich wird.^^
Erstmal Storyboard und den anderen Krams halt. ;)

Aber nochmal ein herzliches Dankeschön für dein überaus tolles Feedback. :D
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Joachim-Berger Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm, also das Gesicht solltest du noch mal überarbeiten. Ganz schön platt. Und du hast den Armreif vergessen. Und ihre Brüste sehen auch komisch aus.
Aber die Effekte sind gut. Du magst sie ja übertrieben nennen, aber ich finds toll.
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Yoah, am Gesicht haste gut recht, sollte das Bild generell nochmal bearbeiten.^^
Aber whow, wie präzise du doch bei so detailsachen bist. ;)

Naja, ich will halt nicht abhängig davon werden, dass jedes meiner Bilder irgendwo irgendwie Effekte haben muss damit sie "gut" sind. Geht mir selber schon auf die Nerven.^^
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Joachim-Berger Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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VIIXIII Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So pretty :3
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Thanks, glad you like it.^^
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VIIXIII Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always like your art!
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Maite-Maiden Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
WOW! So shiny :iconsunglassesplz:
Nice effects :D
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
I tend to overdo with effects, which is actually not good as own opinion.^^
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Maite-Maiden Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
well, that's fine with me :D
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akif91 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist
Wie immer atemberaubend!
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Fromage!^^
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EVOV1 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
I am definitely loving the effects on this one! Great job!
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
Thank you! I'm very glad you like it.^^
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LizzieBCT Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Its so AMAZING!!!! *.* :iconamazingplz:
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Juh-Juh Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. ^_^
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LizzieBCT Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Its great work :hug:
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